How I Write Mysteries
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A while back, I wrote a post about the elements that go into
making a great mystery. And afterwards, I kind of wanted to share my own
process for writing in this genre. As a self-confessed chronic pantser who has
a major aversion to anything that could possibly be classed as an outline,
mystery writing really hasn’t come naturally to me. It’s taken me a while to
find a process that works for me, and I’m certainly not claiming that this is
the best process ever. But a process it is, and it is mine, and it works. And
today I want to share it with you.
What’s The Big Idea?
Every mystery starts with a big idea. A murder. A theft. A
kidnapping. Whatever it is, this is the first thing I know for sure about my book.
Usually, when I’m coming up with my big idea, I also find out its unique or
special factor. If it’s a murder, it’s committed in a waxwork museum. If it’s a
theft, the thief is stealing a jewelled mask at a masquerade party. I try and
nail down this idea as solidly as possible right off the bat.
Brainstorming Bonanza
This is the most enjoyable part of the whole planning
process. In this step, I get to make a list of everything I’d like to include
in the book. I might want twins to be part of the solution, or have parallel
mysteries, that tie together at the end or maybe I’d rather like to shoehorn a
cupcake shop in there somewhere. It doesn’t matter how random or out of place
the idea is, it all goes on the list. The more ideas I get down now, the more I
have to work with later.
Hero VS Villain
One of the other really important pieces I like to get
straight before I start plotting the book is the identity of the hero and
villain. It is especially important to know who the villain is as the whole
solution to the mystery is based around that fact. But knowing who the hero is
also gives me the chance to make the mystery more personal to them. Maybe it
involves war crimes and they were a solider, or they know the villain, or the
case is super personal to them because of a past experience. If I know who the
hero is, I can work this sort of thing in right from the start.
Putting the Puzzle Together
This is painstakingly slow bit, and is probably the hardest
step for me as a pantser. For a mystery to work, you have to do at least a
little plotting, even if you’re a pantser (unless you’re super smart, in which
case I salute you). Taking the pieces I’ve already brainstormed, I start
fitting them together. Usually they go together in disconnected segments. I
might have some ideas about the end, a section around the first murder, and a
nice little sequence involving cupcakes. From here I build up around them as
much as possible.
Activate the Timeline
This is as organised and as close to an outline as I ever
get, but it does make the plotting and writing of mysteries much easier for me.
Once I have enough plot to be going on with, I slot all the events in a
timeline. This way I can see how everything pans out, whether there are any
parts with too much or too little happening, whether the timeframe is realistic
and, most importantly, where I have gaps in the plot.
At this point, it’s usually pretty easy to see where I need
to do research, and this is when I start looking into that to help me make
sense of the plot and fill the gaps in my story. I don’t really do a lot of in
depth research at this point. Just enough to let me know whether what I’m
planning sounds plausible or not. And usually this research sparks a few other
ideas that are mighty helpful as well.
For me, this timeline is very basic. As a pantser, I don’t
like working with lots of details, so usually I have a day, and a few bullet
points for the important events. This gives me enough knowledge of the plot so
that everything should make sense, I don’t get lost, and everything should tie
together nicely at the end, but leaves all the fun bits to be worked out during
the writing stage, which appeases my pantser personality.
Fill in the Holes
Timelining points out all the holes. And there are a lot of
them. This is the point where I usually need a brainstorming buddy to help me
work out how to bridge my solid sections and tie the threads together. This is
the most time consuming, frustrating stage for me, and it’s only with the great
help of my brainstorming partner and sister that I ever get through it.
Logic Check
The final step, after I’ve completed my timeline and
brainstormed to fill all the holes, is to do one final check to make sure that
everything happens logically. I also like to check to make sure things aren’t
happening by coincidence, the hero has to work for the ending, and that things
don’t run too smoothly.
Let’s Write This Thing!
After all the planning, checking and (shudder) outlining,
it’s time to write the book. At this point I set out in my epic adventure,
armed with my basic outline, and (hopefully) still full of enthusiasm for the
original idea. Anchors away, and this mystery is ready to set sail!
So that’s how I write
mysteries and thrillers. Have you seen my other post, Elements of A GoodMystery yet? Do you write mysteries or thrillers? Are you a plotter or a pantser?
How much do you like to have planned before you start writing your book?
16 comments
I don't do mysteries very often, but it looks like your process is quite similar to my process for any story which has more than one timeline! (Which tbh is like 50% of them, so.) A timeline is SOOOOO important to my plotting heart ... I used to use cue cards and stick them on a wall, then I tried powerpoints, and now I'm trying tiered outlining, and still trying to figure out what works best!
ReplyDeleteHaha, but multiple timelines are so much fun! There are so many different ways to outline and tools to use, it can be hard to find the one that works for you, isn't it? Thanks for commenting Alyssa!
DeleteGreat tips! I've always adored mysteries, but have always struggled to write them because of pantsing, haha.
ReplyDeleteIt can be such a struggle being a pantser sometimes, isn't it? Anything that requires planning is automatically SO much harder. Thanks for visiting!
DeleteThis is really detailed for someone who doesn't like to plot. ;D I SALUTE YOU. hehe. I have never written a mystery yet! I mean, I sort-of-half-did with my wattpad story, but it was a mystery amongst SO many other things I honestly don't consider it a mystery. xD Ahem. But one day I would like to write one!! BECAUSE WHY NOT. Ahem. I do like how you do the list-of-all-the-random-things-you-want-in-the-story because I do that too!! For every book! It's usually a mental list for me, but I love just picking out things that are interesting/intriguing for me at the time and working them into my book. :P
ReplyDeleteThe terrible truths of mystery writing. They actually make me do plotting work! I think the list-of-all-the-random-things-you-want-in-the-story step of planning anything is the best step *nods* Though, personally, I always have a lot of things that simply refuse to go together, just to spite me. Or I am a very random person. One of those two options...
DeleteOh I tried writing a mystery once, it was a terrible experience. I had the whole plot in mind but I couldn't figure out the details of how it happened. Perhaps I should have drawn a timeline too to get a grip on what characters would be on a free slot during the murder etc to help orchestrate the entire mystery.
ReplyDeleteGreat post!
I can totally sympathise with this! The first couple of mysteries I tried writing I didn't really plan at all and they flopped so badly. Timelining is a great way to get all the threads of the mystery laid out nicely without having to work out everything little detail about everything else.
DeleteThis is an interesting process. I'll definitely keep this in mind if I ever write a mystery, which I'd like to do one day. ^ ^
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I'm glad these was helpful for you Victoria. Writing a mystery definitely needs some sort of planning process beforehand to make things easier when writing. I learned that the hard way...
DeleteThis is such a helpful article! Definitely going on Pinterest :) I wrote several fantasy/mystery novellas a few years ago, and it was really fun.
ReplyDeleteEllie | On the Other Side of Reality
There's something so amazing about weaving a tightly constructed mystery plot and making all the threads come together at the end, isn't there? I find them difficult to get right, but it's so rewarding when it's all comes together! Thanks for stopping by, Ellie.
DeleteThis makes it sound so easy!! I love mysteries. I love twists. I love multiple things happening. But I'm so intimidated by writing them!
ReplyDeleteHaha, I wish it was so easy when I'm actually writing them! But it is so worth it for all those twists and turns and reveals. They definitely benefit from a bit of prep beforehand though! It makes them a lot less intimidating that way. Thank you for your comment!
DeleteOoh, this sounds like a lot of planning. *hides from planning* But it actually doesn't sound all too scary, like, it's something I could possibly manage. Maybe. *resumes hiding* I've always wanted to write mysteries, but I've always been rather afraid to as well, since planning does not come naturally to me at all. But this might be a fun exercise to try, at least to get my brain to do something it doesn't ordinary do. It might be fun. *goes into even deeper hiding*
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing! :)
I knooooowww. I hate planning. The only way I get through is with a brainstorming buddy keeping me on track, otherwise I go off on a tangent about robot chickens and avoid the issue. But that's about the minimum plotting I've managed to safely get away with so far. It's not too bad really though. It's actually more fun than I thought, piecing together the pieces of the puzzle. You should definitely try it. I could see you writing an awesome mystery.
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